What kind of person do you think Mrs. Teaberry is? She is very nice neighbor and friendly with everybody but, especially with Mr. Putter.
How you describe Mrs. Teaberry? She is a lonely old woman and, she doesn't like to be along but, she always invited somebody to eat all what she cook.
What she is like. she liked to feed everybody but, most of all, she liked to feed Mr. Putter.
What she looks like. She looks like a helpful woman with others although she and her dog Zeke
live along. She is shorter than Mr. Putter, She has curlier hair than Mr. Putter, She is younger than Mr. Putter
How you describe Mrs. Teaberry? She is a lonely old woman and, she doesn't like to be along but, she always invited somebody to eat all what she cook.
What she is like. she liked to feed everybody but, most of all, she liked to feed Mr. Putter.
What she looks like. She looks like a helpful woman with others although she and her dog Zeke
live along. She is shorter than Mr. Putter, She has curlier hair than Mr. Putter, She is younger than Mr. Putter
Great description. Your run-on sentences are almost gone!
ReplyDeletebe careful: ALONE, not ALONG
She HAS curlier hair
You are writing a lot more -- keep it up. It's improving.